来自：查字典高考网 2014-12-25
我们刊登提供的写作范文目的是为了让大家了解作文的写法，考生切不可背范文，否则有可能考到非常低的分数，甚至可能是零分，切记！！
synyan(孤单一吻)
V105 大作文:911事件以后，全球经济滑坡drop rapidly!to extend your ，somebody
think that this phynomenon is affected by the event，do you agree
or disagree!?and what your countrys state should do?
=================================================================
The popular view all over the world holds that the 911 event has
greatly （affect）AFFECTED the economics not only in USA but also （all
countries.）ALL OVER THE WORLD。Yet the truth （is）THAT global economic
collapsed WAS not because people were disappointed and sad but the
structure was not suitable for global production.
We know in past 10 years the IT industry played an important role
in US. The fast increasing economic of US also encouraged the
global industry because US was the Top1 country of inlet that IT
industry needed and hardware (especially processor) producer.
However，the IT industry is so vulnerable that any unpredictable
factors such as earthquakes in Taiwan island in 2000 could influence
it (Taiwan collects most of the mainboard and EMS memory
producers). The relationship of the economics among the countries
is like human beings nerve system. Once a place turn wrong，the
others will feel pain. So it is true that the 911 is a main signal of
economic depression instead of the cause.
Additional，we can say the phynomenon is a symptom of the
weakness. If take a look at the structure of economics in US，we
will find out that its like a pyramid.The IT has took up so many
places on the top that when the bubble economic is broken，
the confidence of people will have gone with the wind.
Fortunately，Chinese are not greatly suffered from it as other
western countries because China is also a big agriculture
country. But to avoid the incident like 911 and the economic
depression the department of the state should make slightly
control on the fast developing of some industries and enact a law.
说真话，这篇文章写的很好，但只是IT业并不能代表全部，如你所述，它只是其中因
素之一，但你接下来几乎都在讨论IT，最后结尾也如此，有点以偏盖全。从文法方面
说，的确是篇不错的习作。
【Version 105写作参考】相关文章：
★ 雅思写作典型句子
[标签：海外留学,考试,雅思,复习指南]
高考阅卷名师给考生的高考作文密训课 第4集 高考作文审题实操方法精讲（二）
衍声高考琴行2019高本硕学生暑假音乐会 张俊瀚《陕北民歌主题变奏曲》《阿根廷舞曲》第三乐章
高考阅卷名师给考生的高考作文密训课 第5集 高考作文审题实操方法精讲（三）
沈阳音乐学院郎亦农教授的女高音高考曲目解析课程 第1集 沈阳音乐学院郎亦农为你讲解女高音高考曲目
葛军大爷怒了：高考我出了个小学数学送分题，你们跟我说不会做？
探秘历史 第二季 第211集 此人高考数学考了0分，因作文写3句话被重点大学录取
高考体育四项生的日常训练——深蹲移动跳：发展膝关节，踝关节力量。
美术联考用纸上海考试模拟试卷纸高考统考纸 4k水粉纸素描纸 速写纸卡纸美术模拟测试试卷纸 美术考试专用纸
他高考作文仅得6分，总分428分，被985高校录取，却被导师拒绝！
爆笑班主任 第一季 第221集 高考结束学生有多疯狂？山东王老师疯狂吐槽
2019全国高考志愿填报攻略 第50集 天津市高考历史三年本科录取排名
沈阳音乐学院郎亦农教授的女高音高考曲目解析课程 第9集 《赛吾里麦》演唱讲解，音乐表现一定要自然流畅
