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名师：雅思写作词汇评析

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Selectexactlytherightword.

Inaccurate:Iwasdisgustedbecauserainspoiledourpicnic.

Accurate:Iwasdisappointedbecauserainspoiledourpicnic.

Accurate:Iwasdisgustedbythemindlessviolenceinthemovie.

Donot---werepeat,donot---confusewordsbecausetheysoundalikeoraresimilarinmeaning

Wrongword:todayssocietyhasbeenpilferedwithbarragelegalizeddrugs

Improved:abarrageoflegalizeddrugshasproliferatedintodayssociety.

Wrong:theRussianshavenotbeensufficientlyforthcomingaboutthetreaty.

Improved:theRussianshavenotbeensufficientlyforthrightaboutthetreaty.

Uselively,concrete,specificterms.

Limp:wegotintothecar.

Improved:allfourofuspiledintoHermansHond.

Limp:thisdogcameup,allexcited.

Improved:adogcameboundingamonguswithaloudvolleyofbarksandleaprounduswaggingitswholebody,wildwithleeatfindingsomanyhumanbeingstogether.

Moverunsprint

VehiclecarsedanJaguar

AnimaldogCollieLassie

Dull:Seymourwasuplatelastnighttryingtofinishtypinghistermpaper.

Specific:Seymorsathunchedoverhistypewriter,peckingawaydoggedlyuntilthreeoclockinthemorning,tryingtofinishhispaperonthematinghabitsofhippopotamuses.

Avoidbafflegab

Bafflegab:theproductionoftoxicandnoxiousresiduehydrochloricacidobviatesitsefficaciousapplicationsinceitmyprovecompatiblewithmetallicpermanence.

Translation:dontusehydrochloricacid:iteatshelloutofthepipes,

Bafflegab;Consumerelementsarecontinuingtostressthefundamentalnecessityofastabilizationofthepricestructureatalowerlevelthanexistsatthepresenttime.

Translation:Consumerkeepsayingthatpricesmustgodownandstaydown.

Bafflegab:thefinancedirectorclaimedthatsubstantialeconomieserebeingeffectedinhisdivisionbyincreasingthetimeintervalbetweendistributionofdata-elicitingformstobusinessentities.

Translation:thefiancdirectorsaidhisdivisionwassavingmoneybysendingfewerquestionnairestoemployers.

Avoiddoublespeak

protectionreactionstrike(meaningbombing)

toterminatewithextremeprejudice(toassassinate)

thatstatementisinoperative(itisuntrue)

Beselectivewitheuphemisms

Powderroom(womenstoilet)

Unmentionables(underwear)

Passedaway(died)

Sanitationengineer(garbagecollector)Donotcomparewordsthatdenoteabsolutes,likeunique,omnipotent,infinite.

Illogical:Cloviscameupwithaveryuniquedesign.

Improved:Cloviscameupwithauniquedesign.

Formal,informal,colloquial

Automobilecarride

Comprehendunderstanddig

Departleavesplit

Residencehousecrib

Offensiveunpleasantgross

Exhaustedtiredoutwasted

Dejectedsaddown

Hyperactivejitterywired

Intoxicateddrunksloshed

1.避免重复

Aftertheperformance,wewenttoKarlshousetodiscusswhetheritwasaneffectiveperformance.

Aftertheperformance,wewenttoKarlshousetodiscusswhetherourproductionwaseffective.

Thelengthofhishairaddstothewildappearanceofhishair.

Thelengthofhishairaddstoitswildappearance.

Walkinguptothedoor,Icameupontheskeletonheadofacowplacednexttothedoor.

Walkinguptothehouse,Icameupontheskeletonheadofacowplaced,

2.词汇的准确对应

Yourfirstbigcityisaneventthatchangesyouwholeoutlookifyougrewupinasmalltown.

Yourfirstvisittoabigcityisanexperiencethatchangesyouwholeoutlookifyougrewupinasmalltown.

TheimportanceofgrancefulhipmovementisessentialwhendoingtheBump.

GracefulhipmovementisessentialwhendoingtheBump.

Smoothnessandprecisionareamongthebasicproblemsencounteredbybeginningdancers.

Roughnessandimprecisionareamongtheweaknessesofbeginningdancers.

Possessive

3.Spelloutnumbersonehundredandunder.Ingeneral,writenumbersoveronehundredinfigures.Spelloutroundnumbersrequiringonlyacoupleofwords(twohundredtons,fivethousanddollars).Ifaseriesofnumbersoccursinapassage,andsomeofthemareoverhundred,usefiguresforallofthem.

4.Neverbeginasentencewithanumeral;spellitoutorrewritethesentence.

5.usecommastoseparatenumeralsandplacenamesandtosetoffnamesofpeoplefromtitles.

A.Eudora,whowasbornNovember15,1950,inDenver,Colorado,movedtoDallas,Texas,beforeshewasoldenoughtoski.

B.YoumaywritetoLaverneat375FairviewAvenue,Arlington,TX20036.

C.MyfriendLavernelivesinArlington,Texas.

D.ArthurSchlesinger,Jr.writesintelligentlyandpersuasively.Or:ArthurSchlesinger,Jr.,writesintelligentlyandpersuasively.

E.ThecommitteechoseLolaLopez,attorney-at-law,topresenttheircase.

Avoidusinganyreasonablepersonwouldagreethat.undoubtedly,certainly,anyfoolcanplainlysee,evenafive-year-oldknows

Toobigbetter

Peopletypists

Carscompactforeigncars

SexsexindaytimeTVcommercials