雅思写作十大失败开头

来自：查字典高考网 2014-12-25

典型失败案例：Topic1－Shouldcollegestudentsbeallowedtogetmarried？

Thistopicisveryinteresting。Imveryinterestedintalkingaboutthistopic。BecauseImalsoacollegestudentandImnotmarried

修改方案：开门见山直奔主题

Inmyopinion，itwouldnotbeawisedecisiontoallowcollegestudentstogetmarried。

Topic2－Willmoderntechnology，suchastheInternet，everreplacethebookorthewritingwordasthesolesourceofinformation？（雅思真题）

Ok，thistopicisaverygoodtopic。First，letmetellyouastory：Ihaveafriend，helikesgoontheinternetverymuch。Everyday，heusesinternettoreadnewsorplayinternetgames。Sowecanseetheinternetismoreandmoreimportantinourdailylife。

Topic3－Theimportanceofenvironmentalprotection

Oh，thistopicissurelyveryimportant。Isntit？Ofcourse！Itsreallyveryveryimportant！

见官死开头之二：中式英文人见人晕

典型失败案例：Topic1－Thehappiestmomentinyourlife

Inourlife，therearealwayssomemomentswhichmakeyourheartfloweropenedangrily

Topic2－Thepopulationproblem

Thepopulationproblemisaverybigproblem。Forexample，inthecitycentersofShanghai，wecanalwaysseepeoplemountainpeopleseathere。

Topic3－Istherefairnessintodaysbusinessworld？

Ithinkintodayssociety，thereisnofairnessinthebusinessworld。Forexample，IalwayschoppedwhenIgooutbuythings

Topic4－Theadvantageofbeinganiceperson

Beinganicepersonhavemanyadvantage。Ibelieveifapeoplealwaysdobadthings，hewillgetbaoying。

见官死开头之三：观点模糊态度暧昧（喷血指数：☆☆☆）

典型失败案例：Topic－Shouldcollegestudentsbeallowedtogetmarried？

Ithinkthistopicisveryhardtosay。BecauseIamstillverylittle，only17，andnotmarried，sothistopicisverydifficultforme

见官死开头之四：偏离主题无轨电车（喷血指数：☆☆☆☆）

典型失败案例：Topic－Itissaidthatnowadaysonecannotacquirethequalificationsandqualityessentialtosuccessthroughuniversityeducation。Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththestatement？（雅思真题）

Ithinktosuccess，wemusthavealotofimportantqualities。Tohavetheseimportantqualities，wemustlearnalotofthings，forexample，English，musictools，andetc。Wecanlearnthesequalitiesfromourteachers，ourfriendsandfrombooks。Allinall，wecanlearnfrommanyplaces。

见官死开头之五：语法错误惨不忍睹（喷血指数：☆☆☆）

典型失败案例：Topic－If children behave badly， should their parents accept responsibility and also be punished？（雅思真题）

About this problem， my think is if children behave badly， then parents are not right。 Because teach child is parents responsibility。 So we also punish parents too besides children is also should。

见官死开头之六：过分简单没有重点（喷血指数：☆☆）

典型失败案例：Topic－The importance of environmental protection

This issue is surely very important， lets talk about it！

见官死开头之七：用词不当表达不准（喷血指数：☆☆）

典型失败案例：Topic－Should college students be allowed to get married？

I think college students should not

be allowed to get married because they are very young and so we cant take the responsibility to form a family。

见官死开头之八：意思重复原地踏步（喷血指数：☆☆☆）

典型失败案例：Topic－Your opinion on DINK families

My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing。 And it is a bad thing。 It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes harmful to our society。

见官死开头之九：中国俗语胡乱翻译（喷血指数：☆☆☆☆☆）

典型失败案例：Topic 1－Is it good to have a large family？

I think it is good to have a large family。 Because we Chinese believe a sentence： Many sons， many lucks

正确说法：Happiness lies in having many children

Topic 2 －Should we pretend to know everything or admit our ignorance？

We all know， our Chinese old fathers and grandfathers said： Know is know， dont know is dont know

Topic 3－ Do you think ones character is greatly influenced by his/her family？

Chinese old words says very good： Dragon born dragon， phoenix born phoenix， rats son can make hole

Topic 4－ The advantage of being a nice person

I believe one sentence：A good person is all life safe。 We Chinese people always say： Good has good pay， bad has bad pay。

见官死开头之十：观点武断态度强硬（喷血指数：☆☆☆）

典型失败案例：Topic1－The importance of confidence

In my opinion， confidence is the most important thing for a person。 All the successful people in the world are full of confidence。 While those people who dont have confidence， they all have failed。

Topic 2 － The solution to the traffic problem

I think to solve the traffic problem， very easy！ For those who dont obey the traffic rules， we should put all of them into prison。 If we do that， Im sure there will be no traffic problem any more。

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