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托福指南:作文写作技巧及模板整理

来自:查字典高考网 2014-12-25

新托福考试的最后一部分是写作,要求考生写2篇文章,第一篇叫做综合写作(Integrated writing),让考生用3分钟时间先读一篇约250字的文章,然后听一段2分钟关于对所读内容的评论。再让考生写一篇150到225个字的文章。这篇文章的写作满分详解及满分模板作者早已给出。

第二篇作文叫独立写作,和笔考、机考均无两样,给定考生一熟悉的话题,让考生在30分钟内写一篇300字的文章。典型的问法是:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? One should never judge a person by external appearance. Use specific reasons and details to support you answer.不少同学又跟笔者要独立写作满分详解及满分模板。实际上独立写作详解和模板笔者在很多年前便给出了模板,但不知何故网上和笔者的电脑中再也寻不着。只有提起笔来结合笔者再次参加新托福考试的经验给各位同学重新总结新托福独立写作模板和高分写作技巧。

一、熟悉和理解新托福4大评分标准是高分关键

评分标准1:effectively addresses the writing topic and task.

要求考生有效地阐明主题,考生千万不要跑题。从笔者的教学经验看,考生全部跑题现象较少,但是局部跑题现象十分严重,这也是考生不能轻取高分的缘故。

评分标准2:well organized and well developed 逻辑条理清楚,发展充分。每次作者在讲写作时总是把它和阅读相对照。各位考生要想拿到独立写作满分必须真正理解八股文的结构,千万不要写中国式的八股文,而应写出美式八股文。

评分标准3:uses specific details and examples to support you view 考生的论据一定要具体、明确,且对论点有支持作用,而不能空洞和泛泛而谈。

评分标准4:displays language facility by demonstrating syntactic variety, word choice and idiom.(通过谴词造句和习惯表达来展示语言的熟练程度)这一点是各位考生经常忽视, 迷惘和不清楚的一点。新托福作文占总分120分的30分。我们对大家的要求是在作文上花的时间既要少又要拿高分,至少28分。凡是想拿到28分甚至满分以上的同学一定要注意此项评分标准。能用first千万不要用firstly,能用finally千万不要用last but not least. 不少同学花了很多功夫背这一外国人都不用的词组,能用常用的词千万不要用偏词,同时我们要熟练掌握ETS喜欢的5大语法结构和2种从句。

作文要不要写?当然要写,但我建议考生不要写的太多,写一篇要像一篇,最好让行家改2-3篇。我曾经碰到一个学生把185篇中的184篇均写了。拿给我看,结果同样的错误在184篇均反复出现,让我哭笑不得,一问才知说是老师这么教的。学托福需要勤奋,但像这种勤奋就等于浪费青春岁月。

作文要不要背?最好不要通篇背,可以背一些经典的句型。倘若真要背,一定要认准此篇作文是范文的情况下才能背。

这4个评分标准哪条更重要?这主要取决于考生对作文考分的期望值。若要考满分,此4点均重要。千万不能跑题,一跑题可就是0分了。考试费也就白交了。

二、新托福独立写作满分模板

When it comes to the question of , different people might have different answers. In my view, I think that_________________ can , and . The reasons go as follows.

The main reason for my view is that .

First of all, Second,

Finally,

So, .

Another reason for my view is that .

On one hand, . For example,

. In addition, .

Finally, .

(分理由1) . (分理由2) .

In conclusion, based on the reasons I discussed above,(please rewrite the first paragraph in another way).

新托福写作并不难,不管你中文写作好还是不好,只要真正掌握了写作方法和要求,再写出3-5篇作文。考个满分绝不是什么大惊小怪的事。越来越多同学来阳光学校学托福和托福写作。关键原因是同学们在掌握了我们教的方法后一方面能从容应对写作,更能在写作中取得高分或满分的成绩!

每个人都会说work hard and work smart.但大多数人均没有做到,至少在备战新托福及新托福写人上没做到。

托福作文模板推荐之一

A or B

Depending on personal experience, personality type and emotional concern, we find that some people hold the idea of A meanwhile others prefer to B, from my point of view, it is more advisable to chose A rather than B. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.

The main reason for my propensity for A is that___________________________.就理由进行解释_____________________.For instance,____________________

Another reason can be seen by every one is that____________________________.就理由进行解释___________________For example,____________________

The argument I support in the first paragraph is also in a position of advantage because_____________________________

Although I agree that there may be a couple of advantages of B, I feel that the disadvantages are more obvious. Such as________________.

In a word, ________________________________________________.So, it is sagacious to support the statement that it is better to A.

托福作文模板推荐之二

A or B

将原题复述___________________________________________When faced with the decision of A of B, quite a few would deem that______________________, but others, in contrast, believe A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point. Among countless factors which influence -A/-B, there are three conspicuous aspects as follows.

The main reason for my propensity fo _________is that___________________

The second reason can be seen by every person that________.

In addition, these reason are also usable when we consider that_________.

There are some disadvantages in____________________另一种观点的缺点__________.

In a word, _____________重复观点句并缩写理由__________________.Takingsintosaccount of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that___________.

托福作文模板推荐之三

单一命题式

The answer of this statement depends on your own experience and life style. In my point view, buying computers is as important as, if not more important than, buying books. So it is sagacious to ____________.Among countless factors which influence the choice, these are three conspicuous aspects as follows.

The main reason for my propensity for__________is that____________.

Another reason can be seen by every person is that________________.

Futhermore,______________.

In short,_________________复述前文中的理由______________.

托福作文模板推荐之四

agree or disagree

Some people argue as if it is a general truth that a _____________________________.But to be frank, I cannot agree with them. There are numerous reasons why I hold no confidence on them, and I would explore only a few primary ones here.

The main problem with this argument is that it is ignorant o the basic fact that______________解释本段中心___________.

Another reason why I disagree with the above statement is that I believe that______________.

What is more, some students are interested in____________.

In a word, ________________.

托福作文模板推荐之五

A or B

Some people prefer to A. others believe B. When faced with the decision of A or B, quite a few would claim that______________, but others, in contrast , deem A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point. There are numerous reasons why___________, and I would explore only a few of the most important ones here. The main reason why I agree with the above statement, however, is that_____________________. Take___________as example, ______________. There is another factor that deserves some words here. Such as ________________________.

Similarly, these reasons are also usable when we consider that______________.(exmaples:___________).

From the above you might got idea that I agree______________.(repeat the above three reason____________).So, it is sagacious to support the statement that it is better to _______________.

托福作文模板推荐之六

Agree or disagree

Some people prefer to A, others believe B, Nowadays some may hold the opinion that ________________, but others have a negative attitude. As far as I am concerned, I agree/disagree that_______________. MY arguments for this point are listed as follows.

One of the primary causes is that_______________________.

Examples_______________.

But there is a fruther more subtle point we must consider. Examples.

What is more_______________. Examples___________

General speaking, __________. Recongizing the fact that _______________should drive us to conclude that______________.

托福作文模板推荐之七

A or B

In my point of view, A is as important as, if not more important than B. So it is sagacious to choose A. Among count less factors which influence A. there are three conspicuous aspects as follows.

The above point is certainly true if A is considered. For exmaple,___________________

Another reason why I agree with the above statement is that I believe that A is better than B. For instance,_______________

It would probably not be too kindly disposed to the idea that B is not important . B________也好_________.

In a word, to choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of B, and neglect hte genuinely good aspects of A. For the reasons presented above, I strongly commit to the notion that A, but not B.

托福作文模板推荐之八

A or B

When faced with the decision of A or B, quite a few would claim that A, but others, in contrast, deem B as the premier choice and that is also my point. This quite different view is based on the propensity of following points. We may looksintosevery possible reason, however, fore most reason for B is ____________________. For example, ______________.

Also, ________________________.

This is arbitray to judge B according only to the excuse I mentioned in the above paragraph.

Similarly, these reasons are also usable when we consider that________________. Admittedly, __________________A也有好的地方______________.By he same token, however, ______________B更好____________.Takingsintosaccount of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that_____________.

托福作文模板推荐之九

A or B

When it comes to______________, Nevertheless, in my part, I prefer A rather than B as my inclination. My arguments for this point are listed as follows. I agree with the statement that _________without reservation since___________.

Naturally___________.It can be given a concrete example__________. A more essential factor why I advocate the argument of __________is that. Obviously ________________.Take the case of a thing that____________. Futhermore, what is worth noticing fact is that ________________. This demonstrates the undeniable fact that__________________. Of course, choosing B also has advantages to some extent,_______________此处论述B的1-2优点___________.But if all these factors are contemplated, the advantages of A carry more weight than those of B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that_____________.

托福作文模板推荐之十

____________改写并复述题目____________. There may be by one or two disadvantages to ___________________; however, I believe that there are far more advantages. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.

First of all, perhaps one disadvantages to____________is that______________.For instance, __________________. Another drawback to _____________involves the possibility that____________. For example, ____________. Even though there may be one or two disadvantages to____________, the advantages far outweigh them. The main reason for my propensity for __________is that _________. For exmaple_____________.

Another reason for my inclination for _____________ is that _________________. For example, _________________.

In a word, in spite of the fact that there may be a couple of disadvantages to _____________, I feel that the advantages are more obvious___________.重复优点__________.Takingsintosaccount of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that _____________.

托福作文模板推荐之十一

A or B

____________改写并复述题目____________.The advantages of B carry more weight than those of A. There are numerous reasons why __________, and I would explore only a few of the most important ones here. One of the primary cause is that_______________________.

What is also worth noticing fact is that_____________________.

Futhermore, ________________________.

Although I agree that there may be couple of disadvantages to_________________.I fell that the advantages are more obvious_____________. _______________, Given the factors I have just outlined, I can only say that___________________.

托福作文模板推荐之十二

A or B

____________改写并复述题目____________.When faced withe decision of A or B, quite a few would claim that ___________, but others, in contrast, deem A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point. Among countless factors which influence _________, there are three conspicuous aspects as follows. The main reason for my propensity for ________________ is that _____________. Another reason can be seen by every person is that___________________. The argument I support in the first paragraph is also in a position of advantage because ________________________.

In a word, ___________________. Takingsintosaccount of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that ____________________.

托福作文模板推荐之十三

A or B

From my point of view, it is advisable to choose A rather than B. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.

The main reason for my propensity for ____________________ is that ________________.

There is another factor that deserves some words here.

In a word, ________________________. While it is true that the argument, I disagree hold a little bit of water, I think_______________.

托福作文模板推荐之十四

agree or disagree

Nowadays, some may hold the opinion that ____________________. But others have a negative attitude. As far as I am concerned, I agree that ____________. My arguments for this point are listed as follows. I agree with the statement that ______________________without reservation since ________________.

Another reason why I agree with the above statement is that I believe that________________.

In a word, _________________________. Takingsintosaccount of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that__________.

托福作文模板推荐之十五

agree or disagree

Some people argue as if it is a general truth that a _____________________________.But to be frank, I cannot agree with them. There are numerous reasons why I hold no confidence on them, and I would explore only a few primary ones here.

The main problem with this argument is that it is ignorant o the basic fact that______________解释本段中心___________.

Another reason why I disagree with the above statement is that I believe that______________.

What is more, some students are interested in____________.

In a word, ________________.

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