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41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up. 改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply.
42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.
改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
43. They will learn the bad habits.
改进: They will develop bad habits.
44. In this continued process, people make progress.
改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
49. Children should be taught disciplines insgroupsto avoid unnecessary lost.
改进: Children should be taught discipline insgroupsto avoid unnecessary loss.
50. I felt alone.
改进: I felt lonely
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